THE PRIMAL SWORD [ A SHORT STORY ]

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  NAVAL LANGA posted 5 mnths ago

To  Cheenume 
Ms. Leena,

You are welcome to my blog. Thanks for the descriptive comment.
For the names I have chosen to signify the essense of the character named: Feara for fear, Crowna for king and Goldie for the trader who is interested in collecting gold only. But I think, as you have pointed out too, that looking to the ancient canvass of the story, the names should be little bit glamourous or attractively unusual. Thanks again.

Naval Langa



  Cheenume posted 5 mnths ago

Very vivid imagination....but the names of the main characters somehow do not gel with the story...the names should have been more exotic



  NAVAL LANGA posted 5 mnths ago

To maddss123 

I think I should have atlest twenty-five short stories to be printed as a book. I have just say ten. These ten stories are such in which I can offer a value for the readers time invested in reading it.

Thanks for such a hearty suggestion.

Naval Langa 



  maddss123 posted 5 mnths ago

Navalji

That was an interesting tale about fear!!

I think you should print this short stories as a collection.

Regards



  NAVAL LANGA posted 5 mnths ago

To Mr. V-S-Gopal 
Sir,

It had happend, most of the time, that the men of mind are slaughtered by the men of sword. Socrates and even Jesus are the examples.

Naval Langa



  V-S-Gopal posted 5 mnths ago

Hi Navalji,
 Again, a crisply written story that keeps your interest till the end.
Quite surrealistic. The end was dramatic. I thought the Pundit was going to be the winner.

vs gopal



  NAVAL LANGA posted 5 mnths ago

To teedee27 

Thanks for such a nice comment. As you have pointed out, we need to come out of the realm of our hidden fears. The darkness of the fear can be defeated by the light of knowledge only.

Naval Langa

 



  teedee27 posted 5 mnths ago

NAVAL LANGA

The Primal Sword -Great imagination ! It applies to real life....man is manipulative and controlling. We must learn to have faith in ourselves and not let anyone exploit us.



  NAVAL LANGA posted 5 mnths ago

To Mr. Ranajoy Goswami 

The non-existence of fear also can play a havoc. The fear of punishment compels us to obey the unpleasants laws, too. But sometimes when the rulers and religious heads use this fear for their motives. 

I was used to read articles of Isaac Asimov in my college days. In Science Today, he was writing regularly.

Naval Langa



  Ranajoy Goswami posted 5 mnths ago

The point u r tryin to make Mr.Langa is quite interesting. Also to my interest is that is that fear all that bad. what are the consequences of a non-existence of that fear? it could be a very good experiment dont u think? BTW, have you read Asimov's Foundation? That is the best writing on such a topic, if u can swivel around the sci-fi stuff.





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